Editorial Draft (Maybe too Long)

Below is the Editorial I have done so far, comment and tell me what you think, I think it may be too long, what should I take out, thanks.

When most people pick up a DVD, Book or a Magazine the first thing they see is the front cover, and apparently by looking at the cover they can tell what is inside the magazine. But what you must always remember readers, is that you should never judge a book, or even a magazine by its cover. Yes, the cover is beautiful and well presented but what really matters it what is inside of the magazine that counts, the contents, waiting for you to read each and every word.

With a new magazine, comes new readers and when we make a new issue we think of you, what you want, what you wish to read about and be entertained with. The first issue of ‘Teen-Age’ contains a range of different fun and entertaining contents which is for all teenagers. Our main audience are teenage students, we want to help you with any problems you may have, information you are looking for or to just make you laugh.

With the first issue we cater for females and males, featuring game reviews and product reviews, quizzes and film reviews. If you wish for us to include something you wish to read or a story you have for us then please visit our website (located on the top left hand corner of front cover).

Well, I don’t want to drabble on and keep you from the magazine, thank you and welcome to Teen-Age.

Warm Regards

VCarpenter

Vicky Carpenter
Editor